The maps below show changes in the city of Nelson in recent times. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graphs depict the modifications in the

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of Nelson in the current days.

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, it is

clearly

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to see that Nelson

has now

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a lot of facilities and connections near the

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Centre

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. The

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zone has

rebuilt

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been rebuilt

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and

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now with an area of restaurants and bars

so that

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,

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the

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a properly

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properly

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for

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nightlife. In the

2000 year

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,

at

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the

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north

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the

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we find the university and a woodland beside it. Barely to the southwest

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is the train station. To the west of the downtown, there is an old market. To the south, we have the main road and, more to the south

the

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. Today

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of Nelson has a lot of

constructions

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and connections to give the people better access to the college, and they have more facilities. To the

North

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the high

studies hose

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is still there. The woodland was replaced by a new shopping

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. To the east, a hall of residence was built. To the

south

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the train station was rebuilt and there is a

trainline

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to connect with the university. The

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centre

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has now

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a place to rent bikes, to the

west

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the old market was demolished, and a new shop was erected. To the

east

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a new market opened. To the

south

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the main road was renovated

to

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pedestrians

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and

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the

port

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area was

modernized

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, and a restaurant and a bar were added.