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The table shows average calorie intake in the United States over a period of time. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table shows average calorie intake in the United States over a period of time. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given table illustrates the amount of
calories
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 kept in different products in The USA in three different years (1970, 1990 and 2010).
Overall
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, it can be clearly seen that in 1970
meat
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,
eggs
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 and
nuts
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 got the highest portion of
calories
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, followed by
grains
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 and added fat.
Although
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 added fat got the third-highest position in that time, in 2010 it exhibited the highest amount of
calories
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, followed by
grains
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 and
meat
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,
eggs
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 and
nuts
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. In 1970, the lowest figure came from fruit which showed a slight increase in 1990 and kept the same pattern for 2010. On one hand,
meat
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,
eggs
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 and
nuts
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 exhibited the highest percentage at 465
calories
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, followed by
grains
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 at 430 and added fat at 410.
In addition
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, in 1990
meat
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,
eggs
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 and
nuts
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 demonstrated a modest decline at 455
calories
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.
However
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,
grains
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 and added fat recorded a significant increase at 575 and 460, respectively.
Consequently
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, in 1990
grains
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 got the biggest amount of
calories
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.
On the other hand
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,
although
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 by 2010 fruit had increased its percentage, it still showed the lowest figure at 85, followed by
vegetable
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vegetables
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 (
which
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whose
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 percentage had decreased) at around 120 and dairy at around 255.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "although".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words calories, meat, eggs, nuts, grains with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "showed" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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