The bar graph below represents the data about the clubs joined by the people of two different age groups at a leisure center. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words. Club preferences by age range

The bar graph below represents the data about the clubs joined by the people of two different age groups at a leisure center.

Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

You should write at least 150 words.

Club preferences by age range
The bar chart illustrates the clubs with leisure activities which are joined by two different
age
groups.
First,
the members from the 55 to 65-year-old
years
old category dominated the gardening club with 55 people.
On the other hand
, there were only 25
participants
for gardening coming from the
age
25 to 35
age
group.
Then
, in the photography club, there were about 45 people from each
age
category with a total of 90 members. For other classes, the majority of
participants
were from the 25 to 35
years
with 60 members who joined the arts and crafts class;
nonetheless
, only 20 people were from the
age
of 55 to 65.
This
situation had a similar trend in the cycling club as well
due to
having 65 cyclists from 25 to 35
years
group and 10
participants
from 55 to 65
years
. In conclusion, the gardening class had the highest number of
participants
above 50
years
old,
while
for cycling and arts and crafts classes were mostly dominated by
participants
from the 25 to 35
age
group.
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