The chart below shows the value of one country’s exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words. Export Earnings (2015 -2016)
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The bar chart illustrates the situation of different exported resources between 2015 and 2016.
First,
petroleum
was the most exported product in 2015 and 2016 which was about $60 billion
worth of petroleum
product exported in 2015. This
number experienced an increase of approximately 3% in 2016, made
them Wrong verb form
making
to
nearly $62 million worth Change preposition
apply
petroleum
products exported. Change preposition
of petroleum
Moreover
, engineered goods had risen as well, they exported about $58 billion
worth of it in 2015; nevertheless
, they rose to slightly above $60 billion
in 2016.
On the other hand
, the
gems and Correct article usage
apply
jewelries
experienced a small downfall Change the wording
jewelry
pieces of jewelry
for
export activity in 2016 Change preposition
in
if
compared to 2015, Correct word choice
apply
this
decreases
worth about 5,18%. In 2015, they exported about $42 Wrong verb form
decreased
billion
worth of gems and jewelry
; Change the spelling
jewellery
nonetheless
, only $40 million were exported in 2016.
In conclusion, petroleum
and engineered exported products experienced an increase in 2016 if
compared to 2015. Correct word choice
apply
On the contrary
, the gems and jewelry
export decreased in 2016 from 2015.Change the spelling
jewellery
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