The graphs below show the development of Brindell from 1800 to 2000. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graphs below show the development of Brindell from 1800 to 2000.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The tree maps give information about
Brindell
’s development over two centuries between 1800 and 2000.
Overall
, it can be clearly seen that there has been significant improvement in the
Brindell
area
.
However
, the one only which did not have any change was
Farmland
(crops). Look at the
map
in more detail, in 1800, the
Brindell
area
was still natural with woodland
area
in the northwest of the
map
, and
farmland
for animals in the southeast of the
map
. There was a river stour, which divided the
Brindell
area
with
Farmland
for crops. In 1900, the development had been taken in a certain place including the industry buildings, burn hill as a village for workers were erected in the
Farmland
for animals. The
farmland
for corps,
Brindell
, woodland and river stour remained unchanged. In 2000, there were additional industry buildings to the south of the initial buildings
while
burn hill
Correct your spelling
Burn Hill
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as a village for workers was expanded to the southeast of the
map
.
In addition
, a new burn hill park was built using the half
area
of woodland.
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