The maps below show the village of Stokeford in 1930 and in 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The maps beneath provide detailed data about the township of Stokeford, comparing data from 8 decades apart.
Overall
, it can be observed that the east part of village
exhibited Correct article usage
the village
the
considerable extent, and, Correct article usage
a
consequently
, the new road works were accomplished for the use of residents. Giving a
way to urbanisation, farmlands were replaced by cottages, inhabiting a significant quantity of residents.
Taken together, the agricultural lands for cows Correct article usage
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and
gardens, and stores were totally taken down in order to build the current dwellings. An elementary school was enlarged, and Correct word choice
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the
new roads were constructed. It can be attributed to the convenience of living in residential areas.
On closer observation Correct article usage
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of
a retirement home, which used to be the abode of common people, was expanded in its scale with several trees nearby. Change preposition
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Conversely
, only
construction of the small town, which has remained still is a post office. Correct article usage
the only
Apart from
this
, the territories along the River Stoke haven't been developed yet.Submitted by ansa13 on
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