The charts below show the proportion of people’s total spending in a particular European country was spent on different commodities and services in 1958 and in 2008.
The charts below illustrate the number of people
were
spent on different commodities and Unnecessary verb
apply
service
, particularly in European countries from 1958 to 2008.
Fix the agreement mistake
services
Overall
, it can be seen that sales
in 1958 were highest for food
while
the lowest for housing. In addition
, in sales
in 2008 was the biggest housing, Meanwhile, the lowest was the food
.
On the one hand, Looking at the pie in detail, Sales
in 1958 started the highest that
Correct word choice
apply
food
was at 32 per cent
, followed by housing at 22 per cent
, then
clothing at 18 per cent
. On the other hand
, the lowest data were entertainment, travel/transport and luxury goods range thirteen-seven.
On the other hand
, Regarding the pie chart sales
in 2008, housing was the biggest at 32 per cent
, followed by luxury goods and travel/transport remained the same at 17 per cent
. In contrast
, the lowest were clothing, food
and entertainment just under thirteen per cent
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