The charts below show the percentages of male and female students of different age groups who studied in Australia for full-time and part-time training in 2006.
The two bar charts illustrate the ratio of male and female students of different age groups who studied for full-time and part-time training in Australia during 2006.
Overall
, Linking Words
it is clear that
the two genders from 20 Linking Words
years
to 24 Use synonyms
years
had Use synonyms
a
highest point in Change the article
the
a
part-time training.
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According to
what was shown, from 15 to 19 Linking Words
years
, the Use synonyms
female
students was slightly increasing than male students in both Correct quantifier usage
number of female
training
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trainings
a
part-time by 5% and Correct article usage
apply
a
full-time by 1%. What is more, the percentage of females in both training between 25 to 29 Correct article usage
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years
had the same level Use synonyms
by
about 8%, Change preposition
at
while
the ratio of males Linking Words
in
Change preposition
apply
a
full-time was Correct article usage
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a
less than Change the article
apply
a
part-time Correct article usage
apply
by
about 2%.Change preposition
at
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