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The bar chart shows information about the favorite subjects of students from two middle schools, school A and school B. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The bar chart shows information about the favorite subjects of students from two middle schools, school A and school B. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
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This
 bar chart represents the
number
 of students who
favor
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favour
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 the six
subjects
 in
school
 A and
school
B
.
Overall
, it is evident that the highest
number
 of
subjects
 contributed to
sport
 in
School
 A at 36.
On the other hand
, the lowest
number
 in
favorite
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favourite
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subjects
 is seen in
science
 at 2 in
school
B
.
To begin
with
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with,
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school
 A,
while
sport
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the sport
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 was the most popular
subject
, the
number
 of the rest were relatively popular. The lowest
subject
 is noticed in craft/drawing at 4, which
were
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was
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 9
time
Change to a plural noun
times
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 different from
sport
.
However
, the popularity in
school
B
 was craft/drawing at 25. Turning to
School
B
, craft/drawing, language and social
science
 were the
subject student
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subjects students
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 enjoyed more than at 10.
Science
 was the least popular
subject
 at 2 and lower than almost 13 times in the most
popularity
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popular
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. Despite
this
, the
overall
favorite
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favourite
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subjects
 of
student
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students
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 in
School
 A exceeded
in
Correct pronoun usage
those in
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School
B
, with the exception of
science
 and
sport
.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "overall".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, subjects, school, b, sport, science, subject with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • bar chart
  • comparative data
  • favorite subjects
  • middle schools
  • horizontal axis
  • vertical axis
  • quantifies
  • preference
  • initial observation
  • significantly greater interest
  • shared enthusiasm
  • favored
  • attracts more students
  • draws the highest number
  • popularity
  • outliers
  • subject preferences
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