In a number of counties, some people think it is necessary to spend large sums of money on constructing new railway lines for very fast trains between cities. Others believe the money should be spent on improving existing public transport. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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essay, the unanswered problem will be argued that in a number of countries, some people think it is necessary to spend large sums of

money

on constructing new railway lines for very fast trains between cities. Others believe the

money

should be spent on improving existing public

transports

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Additionally

, my personal

idea

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will be explained. In the beginning, transportation has a huge importance on human life.

Further

, it is one of the inevitable fundamentals of the modern world. In my opinion,

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constructing new railway lines for very fast trains which is binding cities is

necessity

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a necessity

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Second,

money

also

should be spent on improving existing public

transports

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transport

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Consequently

, I support

the

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both aspects of the problem.

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,

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constructing new railway lines for very fast trains which is binding cities has a huge importance for the modern world. We are living in a new era which

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is technologic

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technologic

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, cyber,

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and Artifical

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Artifical

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Artificial

Intelligence based.

Hence

, our transportation

understandings

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has changed. Time is the key

of

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our lives. So

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, fast travel is

inevatible

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inevitable

for humanity.

Therefore

, the government should set aside the taxes for the railways.

Secondly

, taxes

also

should be spent on improving existing public transport. As it said, we are living in the modern world,

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worlds

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basic needs contain adequate transportation possibilities. Think

a

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country which wants to heighten its GDPR, if has inadequate transport possibilities, how can it

will

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be considered

as

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empowered country? Even it can not afford its basic

need

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needs

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such

as public transport. In conclusion, in

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essay, the unanswered problem has

explained

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and

the

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personal ideas

has

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given. The government has to glance

both

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deficiencies and spend its

money

logical

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logically

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