The charts show world pineapple exports by the top three pineapple-producing countries in 2009 and 2019, and a breakdown of the cost to the consumer of each pineapple in 2019. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
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The bar chart shows the comparison of three pineapple-producing states sellings in 2009 and 2019,
while
the pie chart illustrates expenses that created the retail cost
of pineapple in 2019.
Overall
, the most notable change was recorded in country
A, while
country
C showed insignificant improvement over a decade. It can also
be seen that distribution and retail took the lion's share of the final cost
.
The biggest supplier of pineapples
in 2009 was country
B, reaching more than 4 million metric tonnes of pineapples
exported, whereas
country
A and country
B did not estimate 2 million altogether. The situation changed drastically in 2019, the government of country
A decided to increase the provision of pineapples
, at the same time, the previous leader decided to, conversely
to country
A, diminish the amount of exports. Country
C , in fact, contributed to the supplies inessentially, and both years had less than 500.000 tons of export.
The cost
for customers of pineapple in 2019 mostly consisted of distribution and retail costs, 35% to be exact. Next,
profit and taxes were followed by percentage spending, 18% and 16% respectively. In order to get import licences and international transport for pineapples
, countries allocate roughly one-fifth of the cost
. Finally
, the smallest percentages are spent on the production and export of goods.Submitted by Umar on
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