The chart shows the percentage of full-time undergraduate students at universities in three cities by subject area. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the most important features and making comparisons where relevant.
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The bar graph presents a comparative analysis of exercise
participation
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rates
among Australian Use synonyms
males
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females
across six Use synonyms
age
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groups
in 2010.
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females
exhibited higher exercise Use synonyms
rates
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males
, with the 45-54 Use synonyms
age
group demonstrating the highest percentage at 53.3%. Use synonyms
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males
recorded their lowest Use synonyms
participation
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rates
in the 35-44 Use synonyms
age
group at 39.5%.
Male Use synonyms
participation
exceeded 40% in all Use synonyms
age
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groups
except for 35-44. The youngest Use synonyms
age
group, 18-24, had the highest male Use synonyms
participation
rate at 52.8%, surpassing the lowest rate by 13.3%.
Among Use synonyms
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, the 35-44, 45-54, and 55-64 Use synonyms
age
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groups
exhibited comparable Use synonyms
participation
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around
53%. The remaining Change preposition
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age
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groups
displayed slightly lower Use synonyms
rates
, averaging approximately 47%.
Despite these variations, Use synonyms
males
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females
in exercise Use synonyms
participation
across all Use synonyms
age
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groups
, with exceptions in the youngest and oldest Use synonyms
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where the gender disparity was less pronounced.Use synonyms
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