The chart shows the percentage of full-time undergraduate students at universities in three cities by subject area. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the most important features and making comparisons where relevant.
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The bar graph presents a comparative analysis of exercise
participation
rates
among Australian males
and females
across six age
groups
in 2010.
Overall
, females
exhibited higher exercise rates
than males
, with the 45-54 age
group demonstrating the highest percentage at 53.3%. Conversely
, males
recorded their lowest participation
rates
in the 35-44 age
group at 39.5%.
Male participation
exceeded 40% in all age
groups
except for 35-44. The youngest age
group, 18-24, had the highest male participation
rate at 52.8%, surpassing the lowest rate by 13.3%.
Among females
, the 35-44, 45-54, and 55-64 age
groups
exhibited comparable participation
rates
around
53%. The remaining Change preposition
of around
age
groups
displayed slightly lower rates
, averaging approximately 47%.
Despite these variations, males
consistently outperformed females
in exercise participation
across all age
groups
, with exceptions in the youngest and oldest age
groups
where the gender disparity was less pronounced.Submitted by may.pattareepan on
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