The pie charts below show the sources of the electricity produced in four countries between 2003 and 2008.
The pie chart compares the manufacturing of electricity
production
by type, fossil fuels
, renewable energy, and nuclear power
in four different countries between 2004 and 2008.
Overall
, it is clear that
a huge percentage of fossil fuels
were produced in India and Vietnam, while
hydrogen was the main source of electricity in Morocco and Sweden
.
According to
the Indian percentage of fossil fuels
accounted for 81.9% in India, while
this
figure was just 56% in Vietnam. The lower production
was in nuclear power
at 3.5% and 14.6% for hydropower; however
, there was no production
of nuclear power
in Vietnam, and 43.7% of production
consisted of hydropower. Turning to Sweden
, the main source of electricity was hydropower at 52%, while
it was twice as much in Morocco at 95.5%.Moreover
, the percentage of fossil fuels
was approximately similar, at 4% in Sweden
and 4.5% in Morocco, respectively.According to
the data in Sweden
nuclear power
accounted for 44%Submitted by makemoneyizzy16 on
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