The table below shows information about the popluation of new Zealand from 2011 to 2012 by age group. Summarize the formation by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.

The table below shows information about the popluation of new Zealand from 2011 to 2012 by age group. Summarize the formation by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.
The provided table presents information about the population of New Zealand divided by different
age
groups from 2011 to 2012.
Overall
, the percentage of change observed in all ages grows by 0.6%, increasing from 4.381.269 to 4.410.284. A glance at the graph reveals that the
group
of
age
that shows the
most
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highest
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percentage of change is the one
over-65
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over 65
.
In particular
, it registered an increase of 4% but it is
also
the
group
with the smallest population. Indeed, the population changed from 573.946 to 596.903. As it is observed both in the
group
of under 15 and in the range between 15 to 39 the decrease has been minus 0.2%, changing from 898.160 to 896.364 in under 15 and from 1.577.256 to 1.574.102 in the
age
group
of 15-39. Contrarily, in the
age
group
between 40 to 64 it jumped from 1.331.907 to 1.339.898 which consists in an increase of 0.6%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words age, group with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "change" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
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