The table below shows the average income and divorce rates of different sized families living in England in 2004. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.
The bar chart illustrates
that
the percentage of marriage dissolution Correct word choice
apply
rate
in Finland and Sweden from 2011 to 2015.
Overall
, the highest rate
of divorce is
contributed to Swedish partners in 2012. Unnecessary verb
apply
Conversely
, couples in Finland contributed to the lowest breakup rate
throughout the same period.
Focusing on divorce rates in Sweden, starting
at over 40% in 2011, and Wrong verb form
started
then
reached the
peak at just below 50% in 2012. Correct article usage
a
Following
this
, it experienced a gradual decline to the
similar Correct article usage
a
rate
to 2014, before moderate
Correct article usage
a moderate
reducing
to about 35% in 2015.
Turning to the separation Replace the word
reduction
rate
of Finnish partners, it exhibited the lowest rate
in 2012, after beginning at roughly 37% in 2011. Next,
there was a significant increase in the percentage of marriage dissolution rate
from 2012 to 2014, and then
the rate
remained constant at just above 40% in 2015. Despite this
, the divorce rate
in Sweden exceeded the rate
in Finland throughout all periods, with the exception of the year 2015.Submitted by may.pattareepan on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words rate with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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