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The following table shows the number of people from five European nations living in each other’s countries in 2011.

The following table shows the number of people from five European nations living in each other’s countries in 2011.
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The tabular column shows the
number
 of
people
 from five European
nations
 living in each other's countries in 2011.
overall
, the tabular column shows the total
number
 of
people
population
 in Europe in the five countries
British
, German, Italian, Polish and Spain are the five
nations
 which have a higher
population
 of other
nations
people
.
First,
in
British
 the other country
people
 are living in there with a higher
number
 a
population
 of 1.037.000 is the total
population
 of
people
 who are living in
British
. Next Germany has a higher
population
 of
people
 compared to
British
 1.198.000 and it has the largest
number
 the compared to other four
nations
. Italians have the fourth largest
population
 in their country with 196.000. Polish countries have the lowest
population
 there with 6.000 and many
people
 do not like to migrate to Polish.
Last
 Spanish had the third largest amount of
people
 in their nation with 861.000 in their
population
 during the period of 2011. The total
number
 of
people
 living there was around 3.298.000 is their
number
.
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