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The following table shows the number of people from five European nations living in each other’s countries in 2011.

The following table shows the number of people from five European nations living in each other’s countries in 2011.
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The tabular column shows the
number
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 of
people
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 from five European
nations
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 living in each other's countries in 2011.
overall
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, the tabular column shows the total
number
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 of
people
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population
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 in Europe in the five countries
British
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, German, Italian, Polish and Spain are the five
nations
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 which have a higher
population
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 of other
nations
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people
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.
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in
British
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 the other country
people
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 are living in there with a higher
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 a
population
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 of 1.037.000 is the total
population
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 of
people
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 who are living in
British
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. Next Germany has a higher
population
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 of
people
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 compared to
British
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 1.198.000 and it has the largest
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 the compared to other four
nations
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. Italians have the fourth largest
population
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 in their country with 196.000. Polish countries have the lowest
population
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 there with 6.000 and many
people
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 do not like to migrate to Polish.
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 Spanish had the third largest amount of
people
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 in their nation with 861.000 in their
population
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 during the period of 2011. The total
number
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 of
people
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 living there was around 3.298.000 is their
number
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.
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