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The graph below shows the percentage of prt time workers in each country of the united kingdom in 1980 and 2010

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The bar chart gives information about the contribution of workers who had part-time jobs in the four countries of the UK, both in 1980 and in 2010.
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it is clear that
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 the number of people, who had temporary jobs, was the most in 2010 for all the regions except Northern Ireland. As can be seen, Wales accounted for the highest point for the given two years, at about 33% and 36% for 1980 and 2010, respectively. The second place is shown for England with the numbers of exactly 20 per cent in 1980 and just over 30% in 2010. The
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 country with the same pattern is Scotland which had the lowest number in 1980.
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 country witnessed the highest difference in the given period, approximately 10 per cent.
On the contrary
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 other countries, Northern Ireland showed the highest percentage in 1980, just above 15 and experienced the lowest proportion among other countries, just under 15. In total, it was the only country that had the smallest difference between the two years.

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