The chart below shows the result of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The chart illustrates the proportion of habits of city residents for purchasing
coffee
, Tea and drinks in five different Australian cities in the last
four weeks.
Overall
, it can be seen that most of the people
in all cities went to cafes to buy tea or coffee
while
, on the other hand
, little
Correct word choice
fewer
people
went to buy fresh coffee
in all five cities.
Looking into detail, people
in Sydney bought more than 60% of instant coffee
whereas
more than 45% of people
bought instant coffee
. Moreover
, the people
of Sydney consumed 43 coffee
or tea. In addition
, the point worth noting is that the same habit happened in Melbourne.
In all the five countries less than 45% of people
bought fresh coffee
in the last
4 weeks. Moreover
, most noticeably of all it can be seen that, in Adelaide, people
tend to buy instant coffee
instead
of fresh coffee
.Submitted by sajeehulzamans on
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