The charts below show the average percentage in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much
The provided pie charts illustrate how much three types of typical meals have been consumed in the United States.
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,by having a cursory glance at the chart.It can be clearly seen that the consumption of dinner has the largest amount of proportion Linking Words
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,in dinner , sodium and saturated fat present the largest amount of portion about 43% and 37% respectively,compared with added sugar at 23%Linking Words
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