The charts show degrees granted in different fields at the National University in the years 1990, 2000, and 2010. In the pie charts, there were four majors given in those years: Computer science, Medicine, Business, and Law.

The charts show degrees granted in different fields at the National University in the years 1990, 2000, and 2010. In the pie charts, there were four majors given in those years: Computer science, Medicine, Business, and Law.
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pie charts indicate comprehensive information regarding certifications in 4 majors at the National University in 3 one-decade intervals commencing in 1999 and culminating in 2010. From an
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perspective, it is starkly apparent that computer science was the most sought-after major,
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, law was the least preferable one. Upon more rigorous scrutiny, it can be deduced that the lion's share was taken by computer science and business with 30%.
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with the former which rose by 10% the latter diminished to a fifth. By the same token, in 2010 computer science faced an upward trend,
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business descended by 5% . As
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other majors, it can be seen that Medicine stood at
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in 2010
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before
elevating to 30% in 2000,
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, it
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dropped
again to the same amount beginning in 2010. Law was at the bottom of the least with 15% in 1999 and 2010 and 10% in 2000.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however".
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • degrees granted
  • majors
  • trends
  • significant increases/decreases
  • stable trends
  • technological advancements
  • job market demand
  • healthcare policies
  • research breakthroughs
  • economic cycles
  • globalization
  • entrepreneurship trends
  • legislation
  • societal issues
  • international policies
  • academic and professional interests
  • implications
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