It is true that
inChange preposition
show examples
present, rural individuals are moving to countries,
thusCorrect your spelling
show examples
people
population in
the Correct article usage
show examples
rural
areaFix the agreement mistake
show examples
is
declineWrong verb form
show examples
. I think
,Remove the comma
show examples
this
type of moving
haveChange the verb form
show examples
many drawbacks
bothChange preposition
show examples
cities and rural
people
. In
this
essay, I will try to explain what I thought.
There are several
reasonChange to a plural noun
show examples
for
this
moving
but the main reason is money.
People
who live in
countrysideCorrect article usage
show examples
move into
a citiesCorrect the article-noun agreement
show examples
for work
and high salary
.
Thus
, it leads
Change preposition
show examples
over-populationCorrect your spelling
show examples
and lack of nutrition sources
due to
over consumptionCorrect your spelling
show examples
. Because of the demand, goods price is increasing and they cannot afford so many things, even some basic things, like
. They had
aChange the article
show examples
about living a life, but capitalism not
offersWrong verb form
show examples
these personChange the determiner
show examples
any change.
In addition
, generally, they work as
a Remove the article
show examples
laborChange the spelling
show examples
below some bosses. Their work hours are so long, and especially during
to Change preposition
show examples
dismissal
it leads
increasingChange preposition
show examples
traffic
jamFix the agreement mistake
show examples
.
For example
, In İstanbul, I could not get into
subway
due to
crowdedAdd a missing verb
show examples
after
the Correct article usage
show examples
7. pm.
On the other hand
, drawbacks are not only relative
aboutChange preposition
show examples
people
or
city'sCorrect article usage
show examples
capacity.
Due to
this
movement, nowadays agriculture
areChange the verb form
show examples
decreasing and export
goodFix the agreement mistake
show examples
are increasing. We do not
ensureVerb problem
show examples
about what we eat. Expert says that there is a huge increase
aboutChange preposition
show examples
unnatural crop consumption.
In conclusion, I believe that there are
some Correct quantifier usage
show examples
many negative effects
aboutChange preposition
show examples
this
development.
However
, we cannot blame rural
people
to move a new city, they often had to do
this
. I think, if governments decrease
banksFix the agreement mistake
show examples
loans' interest for farmers and
they Correct pronoun usage
show examples
provide good life
opportunityFix the agreement mistake
show examples
in rural
areaFix the agreement mistake
show examples
, rural
people
doVerb problem
show examples
not want to live in dirty and
cities.
Thus
, we achieve good crops for low
priceFix the agreement mistake
show examples
.