Although families have influence on a children’s development, factors outside the home play a bigger part in their lives nowadays. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is often argued that even though families have a significant impact on the

development

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of young people, there are bigger influences apart from their home environment.

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essay agrees with

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view and it is my firm belief that a children's

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is more affected by the school environment and peer interactions.

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with, the experience that students have in school is more

influencial

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influential

in terms of their

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development

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is simply because they tend to spend the majority of

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day in educational institutions. Guided by a

profesionally

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professionally

trained teacher, schools provide a room for self-expression and self-discovery, which not every student has access to at home.

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, subjects,

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as music or art, allow the learner to be creative, which is essential for people's cognitive

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.

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, peer groups and social relationships can be hugely impactful.

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is to say, social interactions,

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as communication or the

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imitation

of specific observed

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, are mainly responsible for teaching children and teenagers empathy and kindness.

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, they gain knowledge about how to be a functioning member of society.

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, if they

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witness

a friend doing the right thing and

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rewarded for it, they will

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adopt

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behavior

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and apply it in the future. In conclusion,

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essay has shown that factors outside of children's

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,

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as

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nurturing learning atmosphere in school or friendships are more

influencial

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influential

when it comes to their

development

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