The charts below give information on the ages of the populations of Yemen and Italy ni 20 and projections for 2050. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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the pie charts depicting the ages of Yeman and Italy in 2000 and projections for 2050. The age groups being studied in the pie charts are 0-14

years

, 15-59

years

and over 60

years

. It is particularly interesting to note that 15-59

years

in Yeman is projected to increase significantly from 2000 to 2050 by 11%

while

the age group of 0-14 will decline dramatically by 13%.

However

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population

will slightly increase by around 2% only. Regarding Italy's

population

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the 0

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-14

years

age group is projected to vary slightly by 3%. In the

mean

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while

, it is highlighted in the figure that 15-59

years

old will decrease

drasticially

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drastically

by around 15%

while

the

elderlies

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population

is projected to rise

skyhigh

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sky high

sky-high

by around 20%. To

summerize

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, it is obvious that

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the aging

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aging

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ageing

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population

is happening in both developed and

under developed

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underdeveloped

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area

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This

trend will continue to make the

aging

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population

a problem for the world as it increases the burden for youth and society.

Therefore

, it is highly recommended that the governments should set up a pension system and be prepared as early as possible to ease the facilities and medical problems brought

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the

aging

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issue.

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4 paragraphs

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