The charts below give information on the ages of the populations of Yemen and Italy ni 20 and projections for 2050. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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the pie charts depicting the ages of Yeman and Italy in 2000 and projections for 2050. The age groups being studied in the pie charts are 0-14 Correct subject-verb agreement
are
years
, 15-59 years
and over 60 years
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It is particularly interesting to note that 15-59 years
in Yeman is projected to increase significantly from 2000 to 2050 by 11% while
the age group of 0-14 will decline dramatically by 13%. However
, aged
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the aged
population
will slightly increase by around 2% only.
Regarding Italy's population
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the 0
years
age group is projected to vary slightly by 3%. In the mean
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meanwhile
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, it is highlighted in the figure that 15-59 years
old will decrease drasticially
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drastically
while
the elderlies
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population
is projected to rise skyhigh
by around 20%.
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summarise
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the aging
aging
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ageing
population
is happening in both developed and under developed
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underdeveloped
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This
trend will continue to make the aging
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ageing
population
a problem for the world as it increases the burden for youth and society. Therefore
, it is highly recommended that the governments should set up a pension system and be prepared as early as possible to ease the facilities and medical problems brought by
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