The graph below shows the production levels of the main kinds of fuel in the UK between 1981 and 2000. Summarize the formation by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

The graph below shows the production levels of the main kinds of fuel in the UK between 1981 and 2000.

Summarize the formation by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

You should write at least 150 words.
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The chart presents the
production
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levels of important types of substances in the UK between 1981 and 2000
Overall
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, Petroleum had the highest
production
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level as compared to other resources.
Moreover
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, with the passage of time, the
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of coal decreased. At the start of
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, the
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of natural gasses remained the same but after some initial years,
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had increased. From 1981 to 1983 the generation of petroleum increased significantly and remained the same. In 1987 there was a sharp decline in manufacturing.
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, petroleum had the highest
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of 140 energy units as compared to other substances. In the initial
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coal remained in the
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of 80 energy units but there was a steep drop and
after
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this
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, the ratio of
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went down. Natural gas had the
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of 100 energy units which was in the middle as compared to the other two substances.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words production with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "compared" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • production levels
  • fuel types
  • trend
  • fluctuating
  • dominant
  • period
  • rise
  • decline
  • context
  • spikes
  • drops
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