The diagram below shows how a biofuel called ethanol is produced. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Your report should comprise a minimum of 150 words.

The diagram below shows how a biofuel called ethanol is produced.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Your report should comprise a minimum of 150 words.
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The provided diagram illustrates the manufacturing cycle of ethanol which is a biofuel.
Overall
, it can be seen that the production process constitutes a sustainable cycle from
plants
absorbing sunlight and carbon dioxide, harvesting and pre-processing to making cellulose and sugars and processing which leads to ethanol being consumed and again releasing greenhouse gases into the air.
Firstly
, a variety of
plants
and trees absorb energy in terms of sunlight and carbon dioxide in order to grow sufficiently before being harvested and transported to pre-processing
plants
by mechanised machines
such
as tractors.
Subsequently
, the pre-processed materials are developed into cellulose which after processing in designated
plants
utilising chemical
componets
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components
and liquid formulas are turned into artificially designed sugars.
Secondly
, ethanol is the outcome of adding
labratory
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laboratory
manufactured microbes to the artificial sugars.
Moreover
, the final product is being consumed by a spectrum of transport methods and
vehhicles
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vehicles
such
as cars, trucks and
airplanes
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aeroplanes
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which all of
them
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which
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without any exception release carbon dioxide into the air.
Furthermore
, the released greenhouse gas comprises an integral part of
this
exceptionally important and sustainable cycle which produces an environmentally-friendly biofuel
that is
tremendously superior to the conventional fossil fuels as major pollutants.
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