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The plans below show the site of an airport now and how it will look after redevelopment next year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The provided maps demonstrate the planned change for
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Southwest Airport over a duration of one year.
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, the number of gates will be extended, and there will be new spaces,
such
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 as car hire, ATM, and sky train. Currently, the Southwest Airport has only eight gates for the flights, and one door each for departure and
arrivals
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. The passengers may only find
café
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a café
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 during their waiting time, and access to the Passport control and Security to approach their own specified gate by walking through the
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.
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, the
arrivals
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 should pass the passport control and pass their newly bought items through
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customs. In a year, it is expected to add ten more flight gates and they all can be accessed by the sky train. The departures and
arrivals
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 have two doors each,
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 time.
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 individuals who fly off the country should use the check-in, but after the development, it will be sited in the place of
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a café
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.
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, people can still utilize the café which is next to the entrance gate, For
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arrivals
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, ATM for money transactions, and hiring a car for use in
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 country are made to be possible.
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task achievement
The essay covers the overall changes and main features effectively, but it can benefit from more specific examples or details, such as outlining which new features apply to departure or arrival.
coherence cohesion
Ensure sentences flow logically from one to the next by using linking words or phrases to enhance coherence, and try to maintain a more balanced development across all sections.
introduction strength
The introduction clearly outlines the main aspects of the redevelopment, which sets a good context for the reader.
comparison effectiveness
The essay provides a clear comparison between the present and future state of the airport, helping readers understand the developments.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • infrastructure
  • terminal
  • runway
  • refurbishment
  • redevelopment
  • amenities
  • car park
  • hangar
  • concourse
  • public transport hub
  • access roads
  • boarding gates
  • check-in desk
  • baggage claim
  • departure lounge
  • observation deck
  • duty-free shopping
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