The graph below shows UK air pollutants, measured in million tonnes, from three different sources between 1990 and 2005. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The

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bar chart illustrates air pollution in

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the UK

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which

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apply

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was caused by 3 various sources

during

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between

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1990 and 2005. It is clearly seen that the amount of total pollution had a downward trend (negative pattern) and reached around 3 million tonnes in 2005.

while

it was 7 in 1990.

Industry

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The industry

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section ranked first

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among

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these 3 categories for

causeing

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causing

air pollution.

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industry

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the industry

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standed

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stood

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at 5.5 in 1990

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it had a minimal decline and reached 5 in 1993, after that there was a sharp decrease until 1996.

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The industry

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reached 2 slightly

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from

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1996

untill

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until

2005.

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transport and households were almost the same at first (1990) with

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a 0.2

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million tonnes difference, in 2005 the difference between them was around 1 million tonnes (

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1 and

0.1, respectively)

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