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The graph below shows UK air pollutants, measured in million tonnes, from three different sources between 1990 and 2005. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows UK air pollutants, measured in million tonnes, from three different sources between 1990 and 2005. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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the presented
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 bar chart illustrates air pollution in
UK
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the UK
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 which
it
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apply
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was caused by 3 various sources
during
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between
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 1990 and 2005. It is clearly seen that the amount of total pollution had a downward trend (negative pattern) and reached around 3 million tonnes in 2005.
while
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 it was 7 in 1990.
Industry
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The industry
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 section ranked first
between
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among
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 these 3 categories for
causeing
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causing
 air pollution.
According to
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 the figure
industry
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the industry
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standed
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stood
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 at 5.5 in 1990
then
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 it had a minimal decline and reached 5 in 1993, after that there was a sharp decrease until 1996.
Industry
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The industry
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 reached 2 slightly
since
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from
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 1996
untill
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until
 2005.
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 transport and households were almost the same at first (1990) with
0.2
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a 0.2
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 million tonnes difference, in 2005 the difference between them was around 1 million tonnes (
1and
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1 and
 0.1, respectively)

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Vocabulary: The word "difference" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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