The chart below shows the amount of leisure time enjoyed by men and women of diferent employment status. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below. You should write at least 150 words in 20 minutes for this task.
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A glance at the given bar chart depicts the number of
hours
that different sexes with different level
of employment spend Fix the agreement mistake
levels
as
free Change preposition
on
time
.
Overall
, the men savour more hours
in pastime in comparison with women
. Obviously, un employed
and retired people have more leisure Correct your spelling
unemployed
time
than the other groups.
Unemployed and retired men hours
that spend
in pastime stand at about 80 Wrong verb form
are spent
hours
per week. Hours
expenditure by the men and women
that have full
Add a hyphen
full-time
time
job is the lowest mere about 40 hours
per week.
The women
expenditure in free Change noun form
women's
time
follow
Correct subject-verb agreement
follows
similar
trend so the Correct article usage
a similar
women
who have Add a hyphen
part-time
part
Add a hyphen
part-time
time
job
spend and stay in Fix the agreement mistake
jobs
house
for house working accounted for 40 Add an article
the house
hours
per weekSubmitted by speher2000behroozifar on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words hours, time, women with synonyms.
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