In the modern world, the image (photograph or film) is becoming a more powerful way of communicating than the written word. To what extent do you agree or disagree
These days, many
people
used
photos or videos as a new method of Wrong verb form
use
socialize
with others rather than text. I agree with the statement above and I will explain in detail Wrong verb form
socialising
for
the reason Change preposition
apply
of
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for
this
.
To begin
with, there is no doubt that people
nowadays do not like to read. It is obvious that when a person is reading a longer message might prone
to get bored or Add a missing verb
be prone
lost
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lose
in
interest Change preposition
apply
on
reading more. Change preposition
in
However
, people
are more inclined to watch images or films, this
affects
many individuals to start sending Verb problem
causes
an
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apply
image
as a new way of communication Fix the agreement mistake
images
between
others. Change preposition
with
This
hypothesis can be proved based on younger generations, for example
, reading a book with fun or interesting pictures on
it Change preposition
in
are
much Change the verb form
is
exciting
than a normal boring book; Correct quantifier usage
more exciting
likewise
, adults also
enjoy watching entertaiment
shows or news on television or online streaming Correct your spelling
entertainment
app
namely Netflix than Fix the agreement mistake
apps
newspaper
.
Fix the agreement mistake
newspapers
In addition
, this
can act as bridge
owing to language barriers because images can be understood by Correct article usage
a bridge
people
of different lingustic
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linguistic
backgrouds
. Correct your spelling
backgrounds
background
For instance
, a smile or a frown face emoji conveys the same emotion regardless of language. Plus, it can evoke emotions more effectively and quicker
than words. On top of that, Replace the word
quickly
this
methods were popular among the younger groups who Change the determiner
these
are
born in the digital era.
In conclusion, I strongly agree that pictures and videos are becoming a more powerful Wrong verb form
were
deliver
style of interaction than Verb problem
apply
the
written words, considering Correct article usage
apply
people
are getting more
lazy and images are easy to understand.Correct quantifier usage
apply
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Work on grammatical accuracy, particularly with subject-verb agreement and plural forms. For instance, 'people used photos' should be 'people use photos,' and 'lingustic' should be 'linguistic.'
task
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language
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