The world population has been increasing lately. One way to curb excessive growth in the third world countries is to restrict the number of children each couple can have to 1. Other people believe that empowerment of womanis a better way. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

In recent years,

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population

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has been rising, more dramatically in

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developing countries. There are primarily two different approaches for

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speed of the

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rise in those countries.

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some

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of children in a family to at most one, others believe that to make women more powerful in

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is a more powerful way.

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essay will examine both perspectives and present my view on the issue. Proponents of

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prohibiting

the maximum

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of children a couple can have

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that

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solution is the most direct one that can be put into action. If a couple can not have more than one child,

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the

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will decrease gradually as the

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of deaths stays the same and

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of newborns

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diminishes. It's possible to observe quickly the effects of

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practice. In China,

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,

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rule applied and the results were clear, the

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rise stopped effectively.

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, supporters of the empowerment of

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claims that

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solution is as influential as the

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restriction

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excessive growth but

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more humane. It is believed that

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how many children there can be in a family is a

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violation.

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, powerful women in the community

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solely

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of the

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growth, it

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leads to a more civilized

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.

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, South Korea managed to stop the problem by applying

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method

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they could reshape their

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in a better way. In conclusion,

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resticition

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restriction

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is a potent method to handle to high human

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problem, empowering

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offers other merits as well,

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as not violating

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human rights

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and leading to a civilized

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