The charts below give information on the ages of the populations of Yemen and Italy ni 20 and projections for 2050. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below give information on the ages of the populations of Yemen

and Italy ni 20 and projections for 2050.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and

make comparisons where relevant.
The pie chart illustrates data on three different groups
age
of people in Yemen and Italy in 2000 with
prediction
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predictions
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for 2050. The unit given is percentages.
Overall
, the
people
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number of people
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in
age
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the age
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group from 15 to 59 in Yemen has a slight rise
whereas
in Italy has a
decline
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trend. Looking at the population of Yemen, in 2000, older people stood at 3.6%
then
extimated
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estimated
will increase to 5.7% after 50 years.
Age
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15 to 59
year
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years
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old fell a close
second,
accounting for more than two-fifths before climbing to
the
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apply
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first place with
projection
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a projection
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in 2050,
57.3
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of 57.3
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%.
As for
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Age
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age
below 14
year
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years
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old accounted for 46.3% in
initial
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the initial
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year
. It is predicted to decrease to just above a third in the future. Regarding Italy individuals,
age
groups from 15 to more than 60
year
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years
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old will likely
to
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apply
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increase by 20% in the mentioned projection period, 46.2% and 42.3%, respectively.
In contrast
, a younger generation below 14
year
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years
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old has a drop
with
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of
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11.5% in 2050.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words age, year with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • population distribution
  • age group
  • young population
  • mature population
  • aging society
  • demographic shift
  • proportion
  • dominant
  • balanced distribution
  • projected increase
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