The charts below give information on the ages of the populations of Yemen and Italy ni 20 and projections for 2050. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The pie chart illustrates data on three different groups
age
of people in Yemen and Italy in 2000 with prediction
for 2050. The unit given is percentages. Fix the agreement mistake
predictions
Overall
, the people
in Correct quantifier usage
number of people
age
group from 15 to 59 in Yemen has a slight rise Add an article
the age
whereas
in Italy has a decline
trend.
Looking at the population of Yemen, in 2000, older people stood at 3.6% Change the verb form
declining
then
extimated
will increase to 5.7% after 50 years. Correct your spelling
estimated
Age
15 to 59 Wrong verb form
Aged
year
old fell a close Fix the agreement mistake
years
second,
accounting for more than two-fifths before climbing to the
first place with Correct article usage
apply
projection
in 2050, Correct article usage
a projection
57.3
%. Change preposition
of 57.3
As for
Change preposition
Age
age
below 14 year
old accounted for 46.3% in Fix the agreement mistake
years
initial
Add an article
the initial
year
. It is predicted to decrease to just above a third in the future.
Regarding Italy individuals, age
groups from 15 to more than 60 year
old will likely Fix the agreement mistake
years
to
increase by 20% in the mentioned projection period, 46.2% and 42.3%, respectively. Fix the infinitive
apply
In contrast
, a younger generation below 14 year
old has a drop Fix the agreement mistake
years
with
11.5% in 2050.Change preposition
of
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Vocabulary: Replace the words age, year with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
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