The diagram below shows how a biofuel called ethanol is produced. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows how a biofuel called ethanol is produced.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given flowchart illustrates the process of production
one
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kind of biofuel called
ethanol
.
Overall
, the
ethanol
production process has 8 stages, which
starts
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with two natural elements that exist in
environment
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the environment
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and one of them will return again to the environment by using
the
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ethanol
. At
the
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first,
green plants and trees absorb sunlight and carbon dioxide which exist around us and grow,
then
they
harvest
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by tractors and are ready for
per-
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processing. In
this
stage, harvested plants and trees are changed to
material
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a material
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called cellulose and are transferred to processing units. Sugars are the output material of
this
step.
At the end
of the process, sugars are combined with microbes and
ethanol
will be generated.
Ethanol
is used as a fuel for cars, trucks and
airplanes
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, so by consuming and burning
this
fuel, carbon dioxide is produced again and will come back to the environment for
using
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in the first step of
ethanol
production.
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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Vocabulary: Replace the words ethanol with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • procurement
  • raw materials
  • milled
  • surface area
  • fermentable substance
  • enzymes
  • yeast
  • fermentation
  • byproducts
  • isolate
  • purified
  • distillation
  • concentration
  • containers
  • distribution
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