The diagram below shows how a biofuel called ethanol is produced. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given flowchart illustrates the process of production
one
kind of biofuel called Change preposition
of one
ethanol
.
Overall
, the ethanol
production process has 8 stages, which starts
with two natural elements that exist in Correct subject-verb agreement
start
environment
and one of them will return again to the environment by using Add an article
the environment
the
Correct article usage
apply
ethanol
.
At the
Correct article usage
apply
first,
green plants and trees absorb sunlight and carbon dioxide which exist around us and grow, then
they harvest
by tractors and are ready for Wrong verb form
are harvested
per-
processing. In Correct word choice
apply
this
stage, harvested plants and trees are changed to material
called cellulose and are transferred to processing units. Sugars are the output material of Add an article
a material
this
step. At the end
of the process, sugars are combined with microbes and ethanol
will be generated.
Ethanol
is used as a fuel for cars, trucks and airplanes
, so by consuming and burning Change the spelling
aeroplanes
this
fuel, carbon dioxide is produced again and will come back to the environment for using
in the first step of Change the form of the verb
use
ethanol
production.Submitted by n.fallahi327 on
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words ethanol with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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