The diagrams below show the present building of a college and the plan for changes to the college site in the future. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram shows the layout of the present building of a college and the layout of the same site in the year 2020. It is very evident that a lot of changes have been made.
Firstly
, The car parking in the year 2020 would have been increased while
the footpath and the garden would've been removed. The entrance towards the college building will have changed from the north towards the south, upon entering the building, a new reception will have been built. To the east of the reception would be the majority of the classrooms while
towards the north would have been a new toilet instead
of the footpath in the present layout. While
the lunch area would have remained the same, a new shop will be added towards its north. The position of the library would also
be changed, instead
of being in the east of the building, it would be towards the west in 2020. Lastly
, no changes would have been made to the bus stop that is
near the main road.
To conclude
, the college will have made significant changes in the year 2020.Submitted by satyarthverma88 on
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