The charts below give information about USA marriage and divorce rates between 1970 and 2000, and the marital status of Americans in two of the years.
The bar graphs
illustrates
the rates of marriage and divorce cases in 30 years period Change the verb form
illustrate
as well as
the marital status in 1970 and 2000 in United
States of America.
Correct article usage
the United
Overall
, there were many marriage cases throught
the years compared to divorces, widowed and never married.
In 1970, there were about 2,5 Correct your spelling
through
throughout
million
marriages which is more than two times the number of divorces during the same year which stood at 1 million
. The total of marriages plateued
at almost 2,5 Correct your spelling
plateaued
million
in 1980 and divorces increased to nearly 1,5 million
the same year. Marriage cases started to decrease in
1990 to 2000 with approximately 2,5 Change preposition
from
million
and 2 million
respectively.
Consequently
, the total number of married people in 1970 was 10% higher compared to 2000Submitted by sisalt100 on
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