The graph below gives information on the numbers of participants for different activites at one social centre in Melbourne, Australia for the period 2000 to 2020. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
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The graph illustrates the
number
of people
that
joined film clubs, martial arts, Correct pronoun usage
who
amateur
dramatics
, table tennis, and musical performances
at one social centre in Melbourne between 2000 and 2020, with the data measured in numbers. Overall
, it is evident that the most popular activity was film clubs throughout the period, while
amateur
and musical performances
were the most uncommon.
In terms of the highest number
, the film club stood at 65 in 2005. This
number
decreased slightly to 60 in 2010 before bouncing back to around 66 in 2020. Moreover
, in the second position, martial arts started at 35 in 2000. It also
had an unstable trend and did not change at the end
. Meanwhile, table tennis began at 15 in 2000, and successfully overtook martial arts, this
activity witnessed a significant growth to 55 in 2020.
Regarding the remaining activities, there were 25 people
that
joined Correct pronoun usage
who
amateur
dramatics
in 2000. This
number
was followed by musical performances
at 0 people
in 2000. However
, both activities experienced a different trend, the interest in amateur
dramatics
fell moderately to 15 people
and it was overtaken by musical performances
at 17 people
in 2015. Lastly
, Amateur
dramatics
and musical performances
ended at 8 and 19, respectively.Submitted by ru.kabiru.biru on
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Replace the words number, people, amateur, dramatics, performances with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
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