The maps show the outskirts of the town of Fosbury in 1980 and 2015. Summarize information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The maps show the outskirts of the town of Fosbury in 1980 and 2015. Summarize information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The given map illustrates the details of alterations that transpired in the
town
of Fobsbey throughout a period of 35 years. commencing in 1995 and culminating in 2015. From an
overall
perspective, it is starkly apparent that the
town
was modernized and industrialized. The most notable modification took place in construction. upon more rigorous scrutiny regarding the east of the
town
, it can be deduced that the field which was located in the south-east was replaced with residential buildings.
Besides
the houses in the north-east were demolished and a supermarket and parking stood in their place. The hotel remained untouched. As regards the west of the
town
, it can be seen that the tennis court was converted to a sports centre and a car park was erected to the east of that. The park was relocated and terrace houses were constructed in its location at the rear of which there were plenty of houses whose residents had a view of the park. On roundabout can be seen in the central part providing better transportation.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • urban development
  • rural layout
  • open spaces
  • housing areas
  • infrastructure
  • residential areas
  • road networks
  • commercial areas
  • economic growth
  • green spaces
  • urban expansion
  • public amenities
  • community development
  • demolished
  • renovated
  • modernization process
  • transportation infrastructure
  • landscape modification
  • environmental conservation
  • preservation
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