The pie charts below show the average household expenditures in Japan and Malaysia in the year 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

IELTS Writing Task Chart for The pie charts below show the average household expenditures in Japan and Malaysia in the year 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The pie charts compare the median amount of money spent by households in

Japan

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and

Malaysia

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in 2010 and it is measured in percentage.

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, what stands out from the charts is that the Japanese spent most of their budget on other goods and services,

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people

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Malaysia

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spent on housing.

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, health care accounted for the lowest percentage in both countries. With regard to housing and other goods and services, spending on housing in

Japan

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made up 30%,

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this

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figure in

Malaysia

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comprised just above one-fourth. Households in

Japan

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allocated around one-fifth of their money to goods and services;

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this

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category constituted just above one-third of the total in

Malaysia

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. Focusing on health care, transport, and food,

people

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Japan

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and

Malaysia

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paid out on health care 6% and 3%, respectively. Transportation was responsible for one-fifth of the total expenditures of the Japanese,

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Malaysian

people

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spent half of

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figure on transportation.

People

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in both countries allocated a similar proportion of their budget to food; their respective figures for

Japan

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and

Malaysia

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were 24% and 27%.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words japan, malaysia, people with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

181 words

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The pie charts below show the average household expenditures in Japan and Malaysia in the year 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The number of students studying science at university is constantly declining. What do you think are the causes? What effects will this have on our society?

Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at a primary school rather than secondary school. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages??

Many believe that modern technology has brought people together, but others say that it has driven us apart. Discuss both viewpoints and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience.

Some people prefer to watch foreign films rather than locally produced films. Why is this? Do you think the government should spend more money supporting the local film industry?