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We were asked these three questions: What emerging technologies are stirring up privacy concerns today? What makes those concerns similar or different to those surrounding the printing press, photography, and the computer? Do you think those concerns are valid?

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Okay, so far, we have seen in brief what Private Life is all about. Regarding the first question: 1. What emerging technologies are stirring up privacy concerns today? Let's go now to see the dangers which, with the explosion of technology, have literally left no part of Private Life untouched.
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Improve logical structure: organise your ideas into clear, distinct paragraphs, each focusing on one main point.
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Include a clear conclusion that summarizes your main points and restates your thesis in a new way.
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Expand your response to cover all parts of the task in more detail. Provide specific emerging technologies and explain why they raise privacy concerns.
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Add more clear and comprehensive arguments with relevant examples, such as specific instances where privacy has been compromised due to emerging technology.
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The essay shows an understanding of the topic and indicates the direction for a more in-depth discussion.
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Good attempt at introducing the topic of privacy and emerging technology.

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