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You are taking a course at a local collage .The deadline for your project was but you havenʼt finished it -introduce yourself. -explain why you havenʼt handed in the project yet. -request more time to do it

#course #collage #deadline #project #havenʼt #-introduce #-explain #-request #time
Dear Sir or Madam, The reason for writing
this
 letter is about my
project
 unfortunately, I
am
Verb problem
have
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 not
finish
Wrong verb form
finished
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this
project
.
Last
 week,you
give
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gave
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one
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me one
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project
 to me and I have to
this
Add a missing verb
do this
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project
 by
this
 day. I am sorry I am not
finish
Wrong verb form
finished
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however
 If you want, I will finish it
is
Correct your spelling
in
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document
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a document
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. I
am not want
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do not want
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 I know
this
project
 is very important for you. I went
to
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on
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 holiday
last
 week with
may
Correct your spelling
my
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 family. At
the
Correct article usage
apply
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present, I
forget
Wrong verb form
have forgotten
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 about it is things and I
went
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am going
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to
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on
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holiday
Add an article
the holiday
a holiday
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. If I do not forget, I am finishing now. I think, if you want you have to give
3
Correct pronoun usage
me 3
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day
Change to a plural noun
days
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 to
me
Correct pronoun usage
apply
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for
Change preposition
apply
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finish
project
Correct article usage
the project
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 and
also
 you have to give again some new
project
Fix the agreement mistake
projects
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additionally
Rephrase
apply
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because I have enough time for
this
project
additionally
 new
project
. Yours sincerely, Shidiyorova Feruza
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Coherence & Cohesion
Your introduction should clearly state the purpose of your letter and briefly explain your situation. A clear structure with separate paragraphs for each point would also help in improving coherence.
Coherence & Cohesion
It's important to proofread your work to avoid simple grammatical errors and improve the clarity of your message. Consider using tools or consulting with others to help catch these mistakes.
Task Achievement
Make sure each part of the project requirement is addressed clearly. This includes introducing yourself, explaining why the project was not submitted on time, and requesting additional time. Providing specific examples and reasons will strengthen your task achievement.
Task Achievement
Work on expanding your vocabulary and using a variety of sentence structures to make your writing more interesting and less repetitive. This will also help in making your reasons and requests clearer to the reader.

Fully explain your ideas

To get an excellent score in the IELTS Task 2 writing section, one of the easiest and most effective tips is structuring your writing in the most solid format. A great argument essay structure may be divided to four paragraphs, in which comprises of four sentences (excluding the conclusion paragraph, which comprises of three sentences).

For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

Our recommended essay structure above comprises of fifteen (15) sentences, which will make your essay approximately 250 to 275 words.

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