The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
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The maps show a comparison between
current
factory Correct article usage
the current
area
in Norbiton
town and its development in the future. Overall
, Norbiton
industrial Correct article usage
the Norbiton
area
will expand by constructing several buildings and main roads.
Currently, Norbiton
industrial Correct article usage
the Norbiton
area
is consist
of several Change the verb form
consists
factories
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factory
building
that are located Replace the word
buildings
on
the centre and the east of the Change preposition
in
area
. In addition
, there is only one main straight roads
along the centre until the east of Fix the agreement mistake
road
area
which connects to the circle roads to reach some factory buildings. There is Correct article usage
the area
also
a
farmland Remove the article
apply
on
the north which is separated by the river.
Change preposition
in
According to
its future development map, this
area
is planned to expand its area
by constructing some buildings, such
as school
, shops, and medical Fix the agreement mistake
schools
centre
. Fix the agreement mistake
centres
Furthermore
, the building factories will be replaced by some residences which are scattered around the Norbiton
area
. In addition
, some area
of farmland will Fix the agreement mistake
areas
also
be replaced by the housings
which will be connected by a bridge road.Fix the agreement mistake
housing
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