The maps show the outskirts of the town of Fosbury in 1980 and 2015. Summarize information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

IELTS Writing Task Chart for The maps show the outskirts of the town of Fosbury in 1980 and 2015. Summarize information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The figures illustrate the layout of Fosbury

city

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between 1980 and 2015.

Overall

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, the most noticeable thing is changing in the roads.

Besides

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that, the face of

town

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the town

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has developed followed by erasing and adding some features. The ways were developed

with

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adding a circular road in the middle of the town.

In addition

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, in 1980, there were fields but it was turned into warehouses in 2015.

Moreover

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, the developer

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therefore

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lost the terraced houses and changed

into

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them into

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car

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the car

a car

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park and supermarket. In 1980,

area

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the area

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opposite the field

only

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was only

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fulfilled

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filled

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by tennis courts,

then

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it developed into

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a sport

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sport

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sports

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center

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centre

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and car park in 2015.

By contrast

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, the park was relocated near from circular way and the ex-area was used as terraced houses. There was no turning in house land.

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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.

Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.

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Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
0
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
12
Grammar mistakes
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

129 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

urban development
rural layout
open spaces
housing areas
infrastructure
residential areas
road networks
commercial areas
economic growth
green spaces
urban expansion
public amenities
community development
demolished
renovated
modernization process
transportation infrastructure
landscape modification
environmental conservation
preservation

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The maps show the outskirts of the town of Fosbury in 1980 and 2015. Summarize information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

Some people think the government should pay for health care and education, but there is no agreement about whether it is the government’s responsibility. What is your opinion?

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In many countries nowadays, consumers can go to a supermarket and buy food produced all over the world. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

Immigration has a major impact on the society. What are the main reasons of immigration? To what consequences can it lead?