The maps show the outskirts of the town of Fosbury in 1980 and 2015. Summarize information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The figures illustrate the layout of Fosbury
city
between 1980 and 2015.
Capitalize word
City
Overall
, the most noticeable thing is changing in the roads. Besides
that, the face of town
has developed followed by erasing and adding some features.
The ways were developed Add an article
the town
with
adding a circular road in the middle of the town. Change preposition
by
In addition
, in 1980, there were fields but it was turned into warehouses in 2015. Moreover
, the developerAdd the comma(s)
, therefore,
therefore
lost the terraced houses and changed into
Correct pronoun usage
them into
car
park and supermarket.
In 1980, Add an article
the car
a car
area
opposite the field Add an article
the area
only
Add a missing verb
was only
fulfilled
by tennis courts, Verb problem
filled
then
it developed into Correct article usage
a sport
sport
Change the noun form
sports
center
and car park in 2015. Change the spelling
centre
By contrast
, the park was relocated near from circular way and the ex-area was used as terraced houses. There was no turning in house land.Submitted by hikmanurdin04 on
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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