The table shows the proportion of income spent on 4 common items in the UK in 1998. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
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table chart depicts. the proportion of income spent on 4 common items in the UK in 1998. it is clear from the graph that there are 4 common items.
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According to
what is shown adults spent money mostly on foodstuffs 25 %, and men spent 14 % on food, followed by women with 39, Linking Words
additionally
, the children spent more on electronic equipment, Linking Words
Furthermore
, the boys spent nearly 38 % on music, Linking Words
Lastly
, Girls 40 % on Linking Words
tune
, Girls has spent a lot of cash on songs, Add an article
the tune
a tune
besides
the men who spent. 14 % on foodstuffs, looking at women 39 %, and children Linking Words
are
almost 39 % of their money goes to songs, boys, have spent 38 % on music, and 17% was spent on videos by girls.
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To sum up
, we could say that the most thing he paid for was songs, which was paid for by the ladies, I of the chart about foodLinking Words
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