The line graph shows the percentages of Australian export with four countries. The graph below shows the percentage of Australian exports to 4 countries from 1990 to 2012 You should write at least 150 words.
This
line graph reflect
the percentage of Australian exports to 4 countries in a specific Change the verb form
reflects
period
of time, from 1990 to 2012. The most striking growth of
Change preposition
in
export
can be seen in China. Fix the agreement mistake
exports
While
Australia has increased it's sells
to China with growth from 5 to 30 Correct your spelling
its sales
percent
in a Change the spelling
per cent
period
from 2000 to 2012, the
other countries like India and US Correct article usage
apply
has
seen a slightly decreasing percentage of export in their countries. IndiaChange the verb form
have
Add the comma(s)
, for instance,
for instance
had a slightly increasing export with an alteration decrease in the last
2 years. Also
a significant change has Add a comma
Also,
experienced
Add a missing verb
been experienced
Japan
with the percentage Change preposition
in Japan
shrank
over Wrong verb form
shrinking
this
period
of time. Similarly
, US
endured a Correct article usage
the US
clearly
drop from Change the adverb
clear
this
specified period
of time. US
had the most alterations Correct article usage
The US
for instance
slightly
increase and after a clear decreaseChange the word
slight
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 67%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words period with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decrease" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "growth" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 3 times.
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