The line graph shows the percentages of Australian export with four countries. The graph below shows the percentage of Australian exports to 4 countries from 1990 to 2012 You should write at least 150 words.

The line graph shows the percentages of Australian export with four countries.

The graph below shows the percentage of Australian exports to 4 countries from 1990 to 2012

You should write at least 150 words.
This
line graph
reflect
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reflects
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the percentage of Australian exports to 4 countries in a specific
period
of time, from 1990 to 2012. The most striking growth
of
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in
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export
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exports
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can be seen in China.
While
Australia has increased
it's sells
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its sales
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to China with growth from 5 to 30
percent
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per cent
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in a
period
from 2000 to 2012,
the
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apply
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other countries like India and US
has
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have
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seen a slightly decreasing percentage of export in their countries. India
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, for instance,
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for instance
had a slightly increasing export with an alteration decrease in the
last
2 years.
Also
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Also,
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a significant change has
experienced
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been experienced
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Japan
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in Japan
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with the percentage
shrank
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shrinking
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over
this
period
of time.
Similarly
,
US
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the US
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endured a
clearly
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clear
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drop from
this
specified
period
of time.
US
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The US
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had the most alterations
for instance
slightly
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slight
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increase and after a clear decrease
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "for instance".
Introduction: The introduction is missing.
Introduction: Change the first sentence in the introduction.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Basic structure: Write more paragraphs.
Basic structure: Add more body paragraphs.
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Basic structure: Write more paragraphs.
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 67%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words period with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "decrease" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "growth" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 3 times.

You are not ready for IELTS Speaking, if you

  • Can’t speak smoothly without pauses.
  • Use simple words and lack vocabulary.
  • Feel nervous and anxious when speaking.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Line graph
  • Percentage
  • Exports
  • Trend analysis
  • Upward/downward trend
  • Fluctuation
  • Comparison
  • Peak performance
  • Decline
  • Stability
  • Significant
  • Inferred
  • Global events
  • Economic context
  • Reflect
  • Influence
  • Patterns
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