You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The graph below shows the production levels of the main kinds of fuel in the UK between 1981 and 2000. Summarize the formation by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The graph below shows the production levels of the main kinds of fuel in the UK between 1981 and 2000.

Summarize the formation by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

You should write at least 150 words.
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Let us review the graph below which shows the
production
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levels of 3 main types of fuel in Great Britain for 19 years. Obviously, we can see big a difference in
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statistic.
To begin
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with, in 1981 was produced 90 energy
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of petroleum.
Subsequently
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,
this
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number started to increase because
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production
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the production
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of cars was growing rapidly.
Thus
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, the level of creation of petroleum became 140
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in 2000. In turn, natural gas performance was small in 1981, with 40
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.
However
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, it has started to grow rapidly
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the promotion of environmental programs.
As a result
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, the natural gas making increased by 60
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in 2000.
On the other hand
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,
this
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graph shows and fuel
production
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decline as well.
For instance
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, the level of
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of coal was 80 energy
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in 1981. And of course, because it is not environmentally friendly and inefficient creation has begun to fall. In 2000, less than 40 coal
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were produced.
To sum up
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, I can conclude that more efficient and environmentally friendly fuel is steadily increasing in making. At other times, coal has suffered a decline in
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due to
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its shortcomings.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "due to".
Vocabulary: Replace the words production, units with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "shows" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "decline" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "rapidly" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Fuel production
  • Trend
  • Steady
  • Fluctuations
  • Significant
  • Milestones
  • Turning point
  • Peak
  • Decline
  • Evolve
  • Notable
  • Summarize
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