The cost of international travel is decreasing,and tourism is increasing in many countries. What are the advantages and disadvantages of the rising trend of tourism for countries.

The cost of travelling around the world is declining,

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increasing in many

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essay will discuss two benefits and two drawbacks of the rising

trend

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of tourists. On one hand, the

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trend

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of tourism played a fundamental role in cultural exchange between communities. When people travel around the world they expand their knowledge about other cultures

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increase their interest

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exploration and benefit from communicating with others.

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, it had a major role in the

economical

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development

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both the private and governmental sectors.

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,

countries

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like United Arab

Emerities

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Emirates

, had more than 1 million visitors during the

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year , which led to tremendous economical growth.

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on the other hand

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trend

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downside as well.

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, it led to more traffic

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in cities and

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bringing the negative effect of these cars on the environment leading to climate

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,

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trend

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putted

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a

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great pressure on the government because , of

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fact that these

countries

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was

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targeted by terrorist attacks in order to destroy their economy.

terrorist

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tend to choose crowded

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to harm as many people as possible. In conclusion , the low cost of travelling led to more tourists around the globe bringing good things like exchanging cultures and raising the economy.

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these

countries

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became

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a target for

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