The graph and chart give information about the migration to the UK between 2000 and 2008. The line graph shows the intended length of stay of immigrants. The pie chart shows the reasons for migration to the UK in 2008.

The graph and chart give information about the migration to the UK between 2000 and 2008. The line graph shows the intended length of stay of immigrants. The pie chart shows the reasons for migration to the UK in 2008.
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The line graph and bar chart illustrate data regarding the number of inbound and outbound
UK
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migrations between 1999 to 2008 and the net
surplus
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during the same time frame.
Overall
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, it can be seen that both immigration and emigration faced an upward trend over the period given
while
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the number of those coming to the
UK
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was always higher which constituted a net
surplus
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in all
years
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, 2004 being the most noticeable.
Firstly
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, the number of
UK
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emigrations started the period at 300 thousand and
then
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experienced a gradual but consistent growth to 400K in 2006.
Subsequently
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, the figure dropped to about 330 thousand in 2007 before rebounding to over 400K in the
last
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year.
Similarly
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, the inbound migrants to the
UK
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accounted for about 450K in the first year and
then
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slightly climbed to about 510K in 2003.
Also
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, the figure faced a marked increase to just below 600K in 2004 and despite some fluctuations remained approximately steady until 2008.
Secondly
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, the
UK
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always registered a net migration
surplus
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which stood at about 170K in the first and
last
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years
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.
While
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the figure for the
years
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2000-2023 was relatively 150K, it was around 200K or higher for the
years
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2004-2007, 2004 being the peak which registered a
surplus
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of about 250K.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "last, while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words uk, surplus, years, k with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 5 times.
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