The graph and chart give information about the migration to the UK between 2000 and 2008. The line graph shows the intended length of stay of immigrants. The pie chart shows the reasons for migration to the UK in 2008.

The graph and chart give information about the migration to the UK between 2000 and 2008. The line graph shows the intended length of stay of immigrants. The pie chart shows the reasons for migration to the UK in 2008.
The line graph and bar chart illustrate data regarding the number of inbound and outbound
UK
migrations between 1999 to 2008 and the net
surplus
during the same time frame.
Overall
, it can be seen that both immigration and emigration faced an upward trend over the period given
while
the number of those coming to the
UK
was always higher which constituted a net
surplus
in all
years
, 2004 being the most noticeable.
Firstly
, the number of
UK
emigrations started the period at 300 thousand and
then
experienced a gradual but consistent growth to 400K in 2006.
Subsequently
, the figure dropped to about 330 thousand in 2007 before rebounding to over 400K in the
last
year.
Similarly
, the inbound migrants to the
UK
accounted for about 450K in the first year and
then
slightly climbed to about 510K in 2003.
Also
, the figure faced a marked increase to just below 600K in 2004 and despite some fluctuations remained approximately steady until 2008.
Secondly
, the
UK
always registered a net migration
surplus
which stood at about 170K in the first and
last
years
.
While
the figure for the
years
2000-2023 was relatively 150K, it was around 200K or higher for the
years
2004-2007, 2004 being the peak which registered a
surplus
of about 250K.
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