the diagram shows the procedure for university entry for high school graduates. Summarize the information by selecting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

the diagram shows the procedure for university entry for high school graduates.

Summarize the information by selecting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The flowchart illustrates the admission
process
for high school graduates.
Overall
, it is a long
process
and documentation is the essential core of the whole procedure. Individuals must secure
an
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high school degree prior
starting
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the admission
process
followed by completing an application form which is downloadable from
website
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. Forms
then
are sent to the
admin
, who
an
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apply
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decides the compatibility of an applicant by going through the
documents
submitted. If the
documents
are enough,
admin
accepts
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enrolment within two weeks and
process
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of subject selection begins. Once subjects are confirmed,
dean
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the dean
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initiates the registration
process
and
applicant
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the applicant
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enters the university.
However
, if
admin
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the admin
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feels that the
documents
are incomplete, a provisional acceptance is
being
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declared after two weeks where individuals can again compile the
documents
needed and submit
it
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them
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to the
admin
for evaluation. In case the candidate is not suitable, the application is rejected provided with two options.
First,
the application can be submitted again but for the alternative course or else it can be directly cancelled.
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