The diagrams below show the changes that have taken place at West Park Secondary Schools since its construction in 1950. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The given diagrams demonstrate the adjustments at West Park Secondary Schools from the date it was built .

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, It is notable that the remodelling took place in all the buildings except for two areas.

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, the school's main building and the playground remained the same since the opening of the school. In 1980, what was previously known as the area of the houses was replaced by

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car park and a science block.

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, the school building was separated into the main building and the science block.

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, the farmland became a sports field and the playground stayed the same. In 2010, it is obvious that there was an extension for the parking lot which took the location of the sports place

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led to minimising the size of the sports domain.

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resulted in cutting some area for the playground which made it lose about one-third of its space.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

153 words

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subsequently
transformation
expansion
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relocation
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The diagrams below show the changes that have taken place at West Park Secondary Schools since its construction in 1950. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

Some people think that increasing business and cultural contacts worldwide have positive influences on development; others think that they have negative effects on national identities. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

Some people believe that violence on television and in computer games has a damaging effect on the society. Others deny that these factors have any significant influence on people's behaviour. What is your opinion?

Some people believe that poverty is the most serious global problem facing humanity in the twenty first century. Do you agree or disagree? How do you think we should eradicate poverty?

Childood obesity is an increasing problem in Australia as many as two thirds of children are now obese. Schools have a responsilbility to monitor what their students eat and the amount of exercise they do. To what extend do you agree to this statement?