The bar chart shows the types of media that people of different age groups used to get daily news in one country in 2011. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given bar chart provides information about the percentages of
people
who used 3 types of media in 5 different age groups in 2021.
Use synonyms
Overall
, the majority of Linking Words
people
have used the radio in order to get news, Use synonyms
while
microblogging remained unpopular in all ages.
Looking at the details, social networks contributed four-fifths of Linking Words
people
aged between 10 and 17. Use synonyms
Moreover
, Linking Words
while
broadcast accounted for half of social site usage, microblogging forms for only a quarter of it. Among the Linking Words
people
aged between 18 and 29, the radio ranked Use synonyms
first,
but they Linking Words
also
exploited social media a lot. At the same time usage of blogging formed one quarter. The figures for individuals aged 40 and 55 were similar, accounting for just over 90%. Linking Words
However
, Linking Words
while
45% and 25% of the former were responsible for online networks and blogging, the latter’s contributions Linking Words
on
them were roughly one quarter and about 10% respectively. As regards Change preposition
to
people
aged more than 65 years, a small minority use social Use synonyms
network
and blogging; Fix the agreement mistake
networks
however
, broadcast usage Linking Words
consist
of almost 90% in 2021.Wrong verb form
consisted
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however, while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words people with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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