The line chart below displays the crime rates in four different countries (USA, UK, Australia, and South Africa) from 1985 to 2020. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The line chart below displays the crime rates in four different countries (USA, UK, Australia, and South Africa) from 1985 to 2020. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The presented line graph illustrates the rate of crime in four various countries ( USA, UK, Australia and South Africa) between 1985 and 2020. It is clearly seen that the
amount
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of serious assaults was more than the 3 other categories,
while
the rate of the
cities
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homecide
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homicide
homicides
and sexual violence stayed almost the same
in
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this
duration. As can be seen, the
amount
of serious assaults was around 225 in 2003
then
it increased to about 240 which was the highest
amount
of crime in that time and after
that
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it had a downward trend until 2013 with almost 120,
then
it reached 100 in 2018. Sexual violence and
cities
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homicide were almost 40 and 10 in 2003, respectively.
The sexual
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violence fluctuated between 30 and 50
whereas
the
cities
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city's
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homicide fluctuated between 0 and 20. The
amount
of
robbery
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robberies
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maintained
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the same from 2010 to 2013 (100)
then
it had a growth and reached about 100 and stayed the same until 2018.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words amount with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "fluctuated" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.

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