The line chart below displays the crime rates in four different countries (USA, UK, Australia, and South Africa) from 1985 to 2020. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The presented line graph illustrates the rate of crime in four various countries ( USA, UK, Australia and South Africa) between 1985 and 2020.
It is clearly seen that the
amount
of serious assaults was more than the 3 other categories, Change the quantifier
number
while
the rate of the cities
Change noun form
city's
cities'
homecide
and sexual violence stayed almost the same Correct your spelling
homicide
homicides
in
Change preposition
during
this
duration.
As can be seen, the amount
of serious assaults was around 225 in 2003 then
it increased to about 240 which was the highest amount
of crime in that time and after that
it had a downward trend until 2013 with almost 120, Add a comma
that,
then
it reached 100 in 2018. Sexual violence and cities
homicide were almost 40 and 10 in 2003, respectively. Change the noun form
city
The sexual
violence fluctuated between 30 and 50 Correct article usage
Sexual
whereas
the cities
homicide fluctuated between 0 and 20. The Change noun form
city's
cities'
amount
of robbery
Fix the agreement mistake
robberies
maintained
the same from 2010 to 2013 (100) Verb problem
remained
then
it had a growth and reached about 100 and stayed the same until 2018.Submitted by ghazal.seyedi95 on
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